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I do not understand so please help me to see
I can hear but the words mean nothing to me
My breath helps me live  but nothing do I feel
Your touch on my skin,  is it a dream,  or is it real

Why is there so much pain when all we need is love
So much promise but no meaning from above
Take heed of all the voices that keep talking in your head
For each will have an answer to questions we have said

There should not be the classes that seperate and judge
We all should be equals,  till actions take a nudge
There should not be lonliness that a person can slip within
To be cast aside and have no reason is surely a sin

For what God has planned for us and where we chose to stray
These are the confusing questions I ask myself each day
I know that to each question so many answers will be heard
Our mind is capable of understanding but do we heed the word

I guess we need to stop and plan before we act
To praise each other's qualities and not harp on what we lack
Simple is much better and too much will bring us greed
I hear the voices talking and step forward to take the lead
To make my pocket of the world a better place for me
To hear and think,  to touch and feel, most importantly to see
................we all have these questions?
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SuliannH Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2009
I happen to be in this state often, reflecting and questioning on things without really be able to find an answer....yet, I enjoyed the way you expressed it in your poem. :)
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LACYDRAWERS Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2009  Professional Writer
Our minds need constant reminding that we need to make sense of all things big and small...........
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SuliannH Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2009
I agree :)
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Peppermint-Pinwheel Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
lovely :) yes I'm sure everyone has these or similar questions...
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LACYDRAWERS Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2009  Professional Writer
It is when we make sense of all that seems confusing do we realize that life is made up of the sane and the insane..............
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Peppermint-Pinwheel Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
lol, yea ^^
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LACYDRAWERS Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2009  Professional Writer
:giggle: Does that mean that you agree with me?:lmao:
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Peppermint-Pinwheel Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
lol!
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Stroody Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Splendid ! :)
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LACYDRAWERS Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2009  Professional Writer
Thank you very much:iconballoonplz:
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