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Remembering Still..
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Take all despair, the fear and pain
Place it midst drops, of soft summer rain
Draw a deep breath and hold it within
Cleansing the soul of all mortal sin
Seeing with eyes, the beauty serene
Of moments once gone, and yet to be seen
Dew holds the beginning, of each new day
To be felt as we're blessed in every way
Simple will warm the purest of heart
Greed shows no finish, to what we may start
Temper the want, the may and the please
See what is pure, with hands we may seize
Mistakes of our yesterdays, we leave behind
existing today with kin and our kind
Forging a life, in a future to shine
A journey as seen as yours and as mine..
Place it midst drops, of soft summer rain
Draw a deep breath and hold it within
Cleansing the soul of all mortal sin
Seeing with eyes, the beauty serene
Of moments once gone, and yet to be seen
Dew holds the beginning, of each new day
To be felt as we're blessed in every way
Simple will warm the purest of heart
Greed shows no finish, to what we may start
Temper the want, the may and the please
See what is pure, with hands we may seize
Mistakes of our yesterdays, we leave behind
existing today with kin and our kind
Forging a life, in a future to shine
A journey as seen as yours and as mine..
This is a gift to 
for winning the Literature section of 
Winter Compitition.
A poem of inspiration....
A gift given with much pleasure.....
The amazing art is from one of my favourite artists
“This work is copyright. Apart from any use permitted under the Copyright Act 1968, no part may be reproduced by any process, nor may any other exclusive right be exercised, without the permission of (name and address of copyright owner and the year in which the work was made).”
for winning the Literature section of Winter Compitition.A poem of inspiration....
A gift given with much pleasure.....
The amazing art is from one of my favourite artists
“This work is copyright. Apart from any use permitted under the Copyright Act 1968, no part may be reproduced by any process, nor may any other exclusive right be exercised, without the permission of (name and address of copyright owner and the year in which the work was made).”
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Overall Vision Originality Technique ImpactHm! I thought that was really pretty! I like the way it flowed, and the rhyming was very easy on the eyes and not at all forced.
I really like the theme here, too. While the concept is not entirely original, the poem makes up for this in execution. My only problem with it is the very last line, and the title. To have a proper ellipse, there should be three periods. I think that's all I see wrong with this. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" title=" (Big Grin)"/>Overall, the execution was beautiful and the stanzas were well-organized. I also praise you for having good spelling and grammar. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/x/x…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" title="XD"/> Very nice!-Dig