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I walk, I sit, and gaze so breathlessly
Inhaling this scene of pure tranquility
Such beauty in this moment found
The music to my ears this sound
Of crashing waves and mystery deep
With struggles it intends to keep

I sigh when thinking of the souls
lost within the deep blue folds
That something  tangible and yet so raw
Can leave you wanting so much more
I tremble as I smell the salt
Mixed with pain and no-ones fault

I look for miles and all I see
Is promise that was meant to be
Amidst confusion and love's sweet hurt
The grains of sand that turn to dirt
Within my hands it seeps to dust
The sadness torn in loss of trust

She is my sea and in whom I confide
My secrets bitter and the angst I hide
Who listens to my torturous words
On gentle breezes once were heard
Her arms of water take me peacefully
Let me slip within her generousity

My heart is lighter with each step
These memories are forever kept
Within the blue of her embrace
I slip forgotten,  without a trace
Surely my lover will think of me still
This deed I do against my will

Oh my sweet the moments had
Left me happy but also sad
I needed more than was given me
And so I turned towards my Sea
So now I rest and hold you near
With each new wave I shed a tear

Pray not for I am now at peace
Within her watery seaweeds wreath
Amongst the souls of days gone by
With now a smile and no need to cry
Come and sit and get your fill
With crashing waves I am with you still...............
©2009-2010 =LACYDRAWERS
:iconlacydrawers:

Author's Comments

I dedicate this to all who have known love's sweet embrace and to those who are fortunate to still have it in their grasp....................

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:iconlilok-lilok:
Wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!:clap::heart:
:iconsilentplea:
Oh this is so sad....this was incredibly moving to me.
You made me cry! :hug:

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~Shelley

What lies behind us
And what lies before us
Are small matters compared to
what lies within us

~Ralph Waldo Emerson~
:iconlacydrawers:
Awwwww :iconhanratty-stock: Yes I meant this as a sad piece, yet filled with hope, if that makes sense. I find the sea so very calming and I believe she holds so many secrets.......:iconairun-lv:
:iconlacydrawers:
Thank you so much sweet friend. I am so glad you liked my poem......:iconteddy33:
:iconhippievan57:
nicely done :nod:

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War is not healthy for children and other living things ...

~peace, love and groovy stuff~
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:iconlacydrawers:
Thank you so much for your friendship and support dear friend.......:icondarkstone27:
:iconmumiah73:
Oh,beautiful !!! :love:

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:iconhippievan57:
you're very welcome :D

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War is not healthy for children and other living things ...

~peace, love and groovy stuff~
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:icononyaneese:
I am still reeling. Stifling tears and swallowing hard I made it to the end. The goosebumps still cover my skin. You are astoundingly talented, evertyhing I read touches me more. :worship:

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Reality is merely a product of perception. If you don't like what you see try looking at it a different way or from another place. If you still don't like it do something to change it or move on. Yes, it really is that simple.

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